Hy mi name is Armando and I am going to tell you my favorite place in the World, my favorite place in the world is Orlando in New York because of its weather, its time (hours of the day) and its parks.
I like the weather because it is almost always hot, and I get into the pool and it is so refreshing, and I like to because it not rain to much, it’s the best weather of the world.
I like to the time of Orlando (new York) because at 7:00 pm its day steel, and it is night at 8:30pm its very cool.
Last I like the parks because they are the paradise of kids because of the roller coasters, the theaters, water attractions ETC…
I like Orlando and it is my favorite place in the world because of those things
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nice work armqando i like it very much
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ReplyDeletenice blog armand its very good i like it continew like that
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ReplyDeleteHi your text is nice .. remember to check spelling mistakes and punctuation marks .. also capitalization .. is coherent well done!!!
armand i think you are a little confuse because orlando is florida not new york to that only during sommer day ends at eigth thirty .
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armand: first Orlando is not in New York is in U.S.A AND IS IN FLORIDA , but you said what you really like, but correct it and correct spelling too . bye
ReplyDeleteI think you have some mistakes the text is well structured i dont understand some things. Well in general is good
ReplyDeletenew york is not orlando
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